Saturday, April 5, 2014

The Evil, Dreaded, Stupid, Misguided—Synopsis

A lot of agents and some publishers require a query letter, a few pages, and a synopsis.

The truth is that this is simply “stupid.”

Look, I know more than most, that agents and publishers are looking for a reason to NOT request more material. But, it is flawed thinking.

How do I know more than most? Well, when I am not writing under my nom de plume, I am an editor and tiny, miniscule, publisher. Despite our size we get a lot of queries. Yet, we turn most down (mainly due to size and bandwidth, not that many are not good). However, when I wear my writing hat I realize that I SUCK at writing a synopsis. Writing a synopsis is a bit like writing a short story. It takes, in my opinion, a special gift. That gift is not the same as writing a novel.

While flawed, I think that reading the first twenty to fifty pages is a much better indicator.

Maybe (probably) I am just making excuses for my own inadequacies. Yet, when I scan some of our own submissions (where we do indeed ask for a synopsis) the synopsis becomes less of a tool for selection and more of a tool for editing and cross checking the big arc. I don’t look for writing STYLE in a synopsis. Just the arc. Ah, well. The sour grapes I have when I wear my writing hat is the filter when I wear my editing hat. It truly helps me handle rejection on my own and gives me full empathy for all authors going through the submission process.

Friday, April 4, 2014

Book Review: Codex Alera Series by Jim Butcher (AKA the Fury series)

Like most authors, I tend to read a lot also. I thought I would post a few reviews, once in a while, as I read. I will post only Fantasy and Science Fiction in this blog – to tie into my own writing. I tend to give a bit of a writer’s type of review, which I hope is vaguely interesting to some.

I am a big Butcher fan, as are a lot of other people. He consistently ranks as one of the top selling authors.

The Codex Alera series is good, but fairly flawed. Using the Amazon star rating, I give it three stars (which means it is worth reading). Warning, as I am reviewing the entire six book series, there are spoilers.

With fantasy and science fiction, the genre generally focuses on plot and ideas quite a bit with the characters usually second. With Butcher’s Dresden Files series, I would say what makes it a winner is the character gets a lot more emphasis than many writers give in this genre. In Codex Alera the main foci are the ideas and and plot.

The “fury” concept is a nice one—in general. However, I feel that Butcher never really develops any rules for the furies and the use of them. He has a tendency to do this with his other writing, but here it is more extreme. He may have developed them off camera so to speak, but the rules are not evident. Still, in general I can forgive this aspect.

The world and the over arching plot is a bit “been there, read that.” Whether intentionally, or accidently, he borrows a LOT from Robert Jordan’s Wheel of Time series.  Huge, evil force that can destroy the whole world, “slave” collars that are remarkably like the collars in Wheel of Time, a hero who has hidden powers and is coming into them, who leads an ever increasing world wide army, but has compassion for his troops.  A race of warriors that are “barbarians” where the women are super tough, slim and fight well and one falls in love with him and bonds with him. 

Despite that similarity, I like Butcher’s writing more. It is faster, leaner, and does not bog down. At least a few of the main characters actually die (whereas Jordan kept a lot of them alive).

Unlike Dresden, the Codex series is written in multiple points of view. I like that and the third person. He does this well.

What I think is by far the biggest flaw is his ultimate world wide enemy, the Vord. These don’t really become the world enemy until the third book (which I like, the characters drive it forward until then). The vord, without going into too much detail, are simply not believable even within the context of a fantasy world and the furies. They multiply, via a queen at a rate that is impossible given that the queen is busy doing other things. Also, they multiply and sustain themselves in such a way that they destroy all future sources of nourishment completely. This is never explained, if they actually succeeded in conquering the world, they would simply die off from starvation.  Part of the reason this is so annoying is Butcher does a nice job of having various protagonists and antagonists use their brains and the laws of physics generally apply (side note, except the “bending of air” to bring something in focus and closer. You aren’t bending air when you bend the light rays, but that is minor.

Despite the flaws, Butcher does a nice job in weaving in political intrigue and different thinking for different races. If he had not spent so much time in the last three books on simply an army building and fighting, it would have been a better series. I think the first two, or three books are four stars, but the ending set drags this down to four.

It has been said before that there are no new stories, just variations on themes. While generally true, I think this does not vary enough in the overall arch, but is still worth the read. I am sure I will continue to read Butcher as he continues to write. I just hope I don’t imitate him and others too much in my own writing—because the temptation is there. I would almost give him an extra half star in that he proves that he is not a one hit series/style writer with this, despite its flaws.

Tuesday, April 1, 2014

Writing Contest

Win (your choice) of  Kindle Fire HD (7") or Nook HD (7")!

There is a long tradition in fantasy, and science fiction, of shared world writing. The Katar series has a complex world that leaves room for countless stories in the milieu. I invite you to write a short story based on The Katar Legacy and the world as you understand it.

General guidelines. You should not try and kill, or save, any of the major characters mentioned in the book Katar Legacy. However, it is ok to write a backstory on one of the minor characters introduced . You can introduce new characters and aspects to the world. If you are familiar with Thieves World and how that was run, the concept is similar.

While the ideas beyond the Katar milieu are yours, the world is mine and remains so.

By entering this contest you are giving me and New Libri Press first publication rights to reproduce it and publish it electronically.

The winner will be mentioned here and the short story and runner up will be published as small ebook. If the number and quality of submissions justifies it, than more than the two stories will be published.  The possibility exists for a full books of short stories, if the quantity and quality justify it.

Other than the prize, there will be no payment.

More on the main Tobin website: Writing Contest Details